getting a character in
Thursday, January 31st, 2008The Guardian has a good article on creating characters, although as usual with the Guardian, I’m left with the sinking feeling that I’m not at all well read, that I never will be well read, and furthermore that literacy is completely wasted on me. Luckily, there are some excellent and contradictory ideas about what makes a good character, along with examples for philistines like me. Here’s the bit that I want to focus on:
“There is nothing harder than the creation of fictional character. I can tell it from the number of apprentice novels I read that begin with descriptions of photographs. You know the style: ‘My mother is squinting in the fierce sunlight and holding, for some reason, a dead pheasant. She is dressed in old-fashioned lace-up boots, and white gloves. She looks absolutely miserable…’
The unpractised novelist cleaves to the static, because it is much easier to describe than the mobile: it is getting these people out of the aspic of arrest and mobilised in a scene that is hard…”
I’ve read a lot of essays and manuals on writing that advocate for a sort of ‘twenty questions’ approach, but is it really effective?
Ford Madox Ford writes wonderfully about getting a character up and running - what he calls “getting a character in”. Ford and his friend Joseph Conrad loved a sentence from a Guy de Maupassant story: ‘He was a gentleman with red whiskers who always went first through a doorway.’ Ford comments: “that gentleman is so sufficiently got in that you need no more of him to understand how he will act. He has been ‘got in’ and can get to work at once.”
The article goes on to examine the different ways that various writers prove and disprove various rules of characterization, the nature of characters, the limitations of fiction, the strengths of same–it’s well worth the read. I’ll leave you with a final quote that speaks to the ‘getting in’ of characters and just about everything else that can be said aesthetically about fiction:
I think that novels tend to fail not when the characters are not vivid or “deep” enough, but when the novel in question has failed to teach us how to adapt to its conventions.
Litfarm assignment: what are your novel’s (or short story’s, or novella’s) conventions?
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